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The Last Lover

Aug 23, 2009, 8:34:19 AM by ~Black-Rose-In-Bloom
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Traditional Fixed Forms

Some time ago I realized,
Death is the best suitor--
When He finally calls my name, I
Shall utter His, and there He will stand,
like He's been there all along.

I shall gaze into His
Endless, icy blue eyes,
Touch His cold, pale face,
And fall into His arms
Then ask, "What took so long?
I've waited my whole life for you."

His lips shall brush my quivering
flesh as He holds me up,
And beneath the moon, we--
eternally conjoined lovers, we--
Shall dance and twirl,
Kiss and caress and make love.

The Last Lover--Death,
Who shall certainly neither abandon
Nor forsake me, in my
State of wakefulness from
The nightmare of life--
Death, the only lover who keeps His word,

He will whisper in my aching ears,
"I promised I would come
For you, now here we stand.
Another vow I make to you--
You shall eternally reside
With Me, in Me... as Me."

We will then smile,
Full well knowing the truth
Of His words, and the idiocy of
Dreading their sweet imminence.
Forever then we shall dance, and twirl,
Kiss, caress, and make love unparalleled.

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I got all philosophical and poetic one day, and decided to pen out a poem about the way I picture death as an entity. Here's the finished product.

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The Raven and the Moonlight Cloaked in a mournful black,
the Raven waits.

She is in love with the moon,
longs for its comforting glow
and quiet embrace.

Time itself keeps the moon
pinned into the sky, never moving
from its orbit, chained to the stars
forever trapped parallel to her life...

Day and night she flies,
as high as her tired wings carry her,
into the blackest days and brightest nights
until she falls to the earth in exhaustion
yet forever hoping to reach her love.

The moon in its prison longs for the Raven,
for her kiss, the gentle grazing of her wings in his atmosphere,
and for the comfort of her presence, even in the quietest moments.
The RThe Raven and the Moonlight by ~Black-Rose-In-Bloom

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Into the Inferno Slumped over, she stares into a filthy mirror,
muddy-blonde hair mocking her
bruised and knotted face.
Her lip, swollen and stained with warm, wet blood
quivers and threatens another tired tear.

The mirror darkens;
the bruises have faded to yellow smears,
and the blood is an ugly, crusty brown.
Her lost eyes turn a cold black.

She draws back a frustrated and angry fist,
shattering the mirror and destroying the beaten face before her.
She draws back her shoulders, her posture stiff and agressive
to match the now-cold resolve in her eyes.

Chin up, head high, she turns around
to face a wall of infuriated flames.
She draws a few stInto the Inferno by ~Black-Rose-In-Bloom

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chivalry is only for heartless assholes He was a man of pleasant niceties.
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The stories he was told in his youth,
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So he worked away his childhood, trading
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All the little things I gathered all the little things you left behind
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a couple of unfinished arias
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I plucked a memory or two from your lifeless frame
the shape of your mouth closing on my name
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the colour of the reverie
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Apr 21, 2012, 12:34:10 PM by ~Black-Rose-In-Bloom
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i apologize for the long absence. things have been super hectic. I should be finishing college this year. I started a new job working for Walmart back in July last year, and I have since become engaged to the sweetest man on earth <3 but unfortunately he was wrongly accused of something and now sits in prison for the next 4 years. So, in effort to keep myself busy after college and whatnot, you will probably see a lot more of me around this website, whoever "you" may be, since all of my friends on here seem to have abandoned me long ago, before i even disappeared. time to clean out my inbox (all 10,300 notifications) and start anew...

For those of you who I have lost over the years, I'm sorry, for everything.. I know i have been quite a handful, but I was going through an extremely rocky time in my life and was quite mentally unstable. I'm feeling much better these days, in spite of the loss I have taken with my fiance going away. I have found much more constructive ways to deal with things, and who knows maybe it's just age mellowing me out. For the most part, i've hit a dont-give-a-shit attitude about most things. In spite of warnings from an old friend turned enemy (so it appears), I became the cold, soulless thing i feared.. and it isn't really so bad. I'm already working on the downhill end of it it seems like, mostly thanks to the undying love and unconditional understanding of my sweetheart, Muhsin.

He's really the only one who has seen me start to finish through my best and worst times. I understand i was a little psychotic, and everyone has lives to get on with, and I'm not the center of anyone's universe, so I don't hold against anyone the fact that they didn't have heart enough to stick around. I probably wouldn't have either if the shoe was on the other foot. Be that as it may, probably is best for everyone that I disappeared. Those who don't care had their time to forget about me, and those who do will be here as always, silent or not. I'm turning my life over and making it what i want it to be, and i goddamn dare anyone to get in my way this time.

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Listening to: Killswitch Engage--"Unbroken"
Playing: Dragon Age: Origins
Eating: Herr's Baby Back Ribs chips
Drinking: Cherry Crush

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Although known to dabble now and then in 3d graphic landscapes/waterscapes, black-rose-in-bloom is primarily a romantic poet, engaged to be married to the sweetest and sexiest man on earth <3 Currently 25 years old and living in bright and muggy Panama City, FL, and proudly employed with WalMart.

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Hi hi

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but ....you can visit my

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~Black-Rose-In-Bloom May 2, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

hii!!

No problem <3

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~Black-Rose-In-Bloom Apr 26, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

certainly

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*DreamerGirl24 Apr 25, 2012 Student Writer

thanks for the

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~graffi Feb 12, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

hey, just a quick one, Ive wrote you something, but its just for you not DA so I will send it later, hope you like it. I have no phone anymore as I am broke, as soon as I get another I will send the number. Until then, keep dreaming nice dreams.xxxx

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~Black-Rose-In-Bloom Feb 13, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

okays, thanks

I'll be looking out for it.

I hope things have been getting better for you.

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— Dorothy Parker

~Jitsiej Jan 10, 2011

welcome to

we hope you enjoy your stay

a rose by any other name would smell as sweet

~Black-Rose-In-Bloom Jan 11, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

you bet... have been a drooling fan of alucard for a decade and a half <3 Thanks for the invite

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~Jitsiej Jan 12, 2011

no problem

a rose by any other name would smell as sweet

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~graffi Sep 7, 2010 Hobbyist General Artist

didnt get the link hunny bunny, but now im interested, so please send it again, thanks for the messages too.

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